C'est important SVP [correction anglais scolaire]

[enagem09]

Bonjour ! Pour demain je dois rendre un texte a notre prof d'anglais et je pense qu'il y a plein de faute dedans !
Quelqu'un pourrait y regarder svp c'est important et pour demain .



Lord Lucan killed Sandra, the young of children, in his house. Lady Lucan, his wife, saw Sandra died.
Lord Lucan needed to kill his wife because she knew for Sandra.
The police arrived at Lord Lucan's house and of course he isn't here. The police found a paper, " I did not kill woman".
He went to friend's house. Then, he drove as for as London. He left the car near the sea in the south of Londonand then, he disappeared.
The police found the passpord and some money.

[leelou]

Lord Lucan killed Sandra, the youngest of his children, in his house. Lady Lucan, his wife, saw Sandra die. (being killed, dying)
Lord Lucan needed to kill his wife( tu dis plus haut qu'il a tué Sandra et ici sa femme, il a tué qui finalement ? ) because she knew about Sandra.
The police arrived at Lord Lucan's house and of course he wasn't there. The police found a paper, " I did not kill the women".
He went to afriend's house. Then, he drove to London. He left his car near the seaside, at the south of London and then, he disappeared.
The police found the (his) passport and some money.

[Cati]

Lord Lucan needed to kill his wife( tu dis plus haut qu'il a tué Sandra et ici sa femme, il a tué qui finalement ? ) because she knew about Sandra.

Il tue Sandra, ce dont sa femme est témoin. Il doit donc éliminer sa femme également.

[leelou]

ah d'accord