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Posted: 07 Dec 2003 14:02
by La-cosca
merci pour votre aide, et lol, au passage heureuze que mon post ait déclenché une série de petit "amusements entre amis" lol...

tiens et au passage si vous avez encore un peu de temps à me consacrer, est-ce que vous auriez une idée pour alléger ma phrase (en gardant le sens et les temps bien sur)

"the only thing that the young woman's neighbours knew about her, it was that she was from Elmston and that she was trying to trace someone.

(un peu trop de "was, lol, non?)

Posted: 07 Dec 2003 14:16
by serenita
La-cosca wrote:"the only thing that the young woman's neighbours knew about her, it was that she was from Elmston and that she was trying to trace someone.
Proposition:
"The only thing the young woman's neighbours knew about her was (the fact) that she came from Elmston and was trying to trace someone"

Posted: 07 Dec 2003 14:38
by Maïwenn
Oui, j'aurais proposé exactement comme Serenita ! :)


La-cosca, on est tjs prêt pour t'aider !

Posted: 08 Dec 2003 12:44
by La-cosca
ok merci beaucoup à vous deux !!

:D

bonne fin de journée à tous, et à la prochaine !