LokaNova et Freelang

bonjour!**

une prof nous a donné un essai a faire je n'ai pas trop d'idées et mon anglais est mauvais!pourriez vous me donnez des idées et corriger les fautes que j'ai faites.

voici le sujet:
some people believe age is a barrier to self fulfillement.
do you agree or on the contrary do you think it's never too late to achieve something for a better life?

et voici ma production:

I think it's never too late to achieve something for a better life.
On the one hand,the universities are opened for people without distinguish age,as it gives bravery to the elderly.On the other hand,there is no age to learn.
Unfortunately,today,to the studies'end,the elderly don't find a job on account of their age,today we rather accept the youngster.

voilà merci

salut

juste un commentaire: il me semble que ta conception de l'épanouissement n'est pas très large - comme si l'instruction suffisait

andréas

ok mais sinon pour les fautes? merci

I think it's never too late to achieve something for a better life.

On the one hand, universities are open to all people, regardless of age,as it gives bravery to the elderly.On the other hand, there is no age limit for learning.

Unfortunately, nowadays, even with the right qualifications, the elderly have difficulties finding a job, because of their age; younger people are more preferred.

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Je ne comprends pas
It gives bravery to the elderly.
To the studies'end (j'ai interpreté)

Ton emploi 'On the one hand...on the other hand' ne me semble pas valide parce que les deux points ne sont pas en opposition/conflit.

attention: 'the elderly don't find a job on account of their age' veut dire en gros que les agées TROUVENT un emploi mais sur les critères autres que leur age.