LokaNova et Freelang

Bonjour
Dans le cadre de mes étude (BAC+2..dans un IUT en France), je dois écrire deux textes sur des entreprises en Anglais, ce que je viens de faire.
Mais je sais que je ne suis pas vraiment doué pour les langues (même le français lol) et j'ai donc sûrement fait des fautes de grammaires, de syntaxes et d'orthographes..
Es que quelqu'un pourrait regarder mes deux textes, et corriger les erreurs s'il vous plait?
Merci de votre aide

Le premier texte (que je vais devoir présenter à l'oral):

"Good afternoon all

Today, I would like to speak to you about a company that you know all, founded in September 1998 by two former students of Stanford: Larry Page and Sergey Brin.
This public limited company developed around a search engine, designed to offer a simple and fast means of search for information on the WEB.
Offering to the Net surfers, one indexes of more than eight billion URL (Uniform Ressource Locator), it is the largest search engine in the world.
This company, whose the registered office is in California, is quickly became one of most powerful in the world in spite of only 5000 employees throughout the world.
Specialized in the field of data processing, the company maintains its position of leader on the market of research on Internet by proposing innovating functionalities of research such as the translation of web page, the search of similar page or still the possibility of obtaining definitions specifies on a word or an expression.
This public limited company, whose name indicates "1" followed from 100 zeros, knew to develop quickly throughout the world, and in particular in France since it has from now on a trade agency and technical in Paris, place of Opera.
The founders chose this term (10 powers 100) to symbolize the mission of the company, i.e. to organize the immense volume of information available on the Web.

According to you, of which company I do to speak to you?"


Le deuxième texte (c'est que de l'écrit cette fois):

"Auguste Lafayette founded in 1827 a partnership called Lafayette Bank, in Paris. This one has started and it's to develop, by ensuring French companies trading overseas and companies of the FRENCH colonial empire. Thus, during 45 years, it was a successful investment bank.
But in 1870, the Franco-Russian was weakened the company of Auguste Lafayette and this business man decided to marry his only daughter to Charles Hedward Labrouse, the Heir of the Labrousse insurance empire, to resolve his difficulties, in 1875.
Thus, the company, thanks to this family union, thrived during many years, and in 1946, it became a joint stock company.
From now on, more over ensuring the French companies trading abroad, the limited company also insure foreign companies operation in France and it continuous develop in the near and far East, Africa, the Europe, Canada and the USA thanks to many subsidiaries.”

Voila, merci de votre aide, c’est assez important pour moi
J'espére que c'est compréhensible quand même:roll:
^^

Voici ma timide contribution, une petite correction des fautes que j'ai pu apercevoir, j'espère ne pas en avoir inventées, enfin, c'est en attendant qu'un vrai pro en anglais vienne t'aider

Galdoras wrote: "Good afternoon everybody

Today, I would like to talk about a company that all of you know. It was founded in September 1998 by two former students of Stanford: Larry Page and Sergey Brin.
This public limited company developed around a search engine, designed to offer a simple and fast means of search for information on the WEB.
Offering to the Net surfers, one indexes of more than eight billion URL (Uniform Ressource Locator), it is the largest search engine in the world.
This company, whose (-) registered office is in California, (has) quickly became one of most powerful in the world in spite of only 5000 employees throughout the world.
Specialized in the field of data processing, the company maintains its position of leader on the market of research on the Internet by proposing innovating functionalities of research such as the translation of web pages, the search of similar pages or still the possibility of obtaining specific definitions of a word or an expression.
This public limited company, whose name indicates "1" followed from 100 zeros, knew (got?) to develop quickly throughout the world, particularly in France since it has from now on a trade agency and technical* in Paris, place of Opera. (je crois que tu peux dire les noms des rues en Français)
The founders chose this term (10 to the power of 100) to symbolize the mission of the company, i.e.** to organize the immense volume of information available on the Web.

According to you/, which company am I talking about?" (ou what do you think is the company i'm talking about?)


*a trade agency and technical... il me semble qu'il manque un mot, non?


Le deuxième texte (c'est que de l'écrit cette fois):

"Auguste Lafayette founded in 1827 a partnership called Lafayette Bank, in Paris. This one has started and it's to develop, by ensuring French companies trading overseas and companies of the FRENCH colonial empire. Thus, during 45 years, it was a successful investment bank.
But in 1870, the Franco-Russian weakened the company of Auguste Lafayette and this business man decided to marry his only daughter to Charles Hedward Labrouse, the Heir of the Labrousse insurance empire, to resolve his difficulties, in 1875.
Thus, the company, thanks to this family union, thrived during many years, and in 1946, it became a joint stock company.
From now on, more over ensuring the French companies trading abroad, the limited company also insure foreign companies operation in France and it continuously develop in the near and far East, Africa, the Europe, Canada and the USA thanks to many subsidiaries.”

merci kaolyn de ton aide
Un "pro" peut il y jeter un coup d'oeil et me dire si il reste des fautes?