français-anglais [écrire un mail] (la marmotte)
Posted: 11 Oct 2006 11:55
Salut à tous, voilà, j'ai un travail à faire. Je dois écrire un mail qui doit répondre à un mail d'un écossais (alisdair) qu'on a étudié en classe. On doit se présenter et présenter sa famille. (critères d'évaluation: complexité du texte, relatifs, prise de risque...)
voilà mon texte.
Hi Alisdair !
I’ve just received your mail that’s why I am writing this mail.
You asked me to introduce myself consequently I introduce myself and my family.
So, my name is …. and I was born on 24 January, 199.. wheras you you are 15. I’m aquarian .
I live in Vitry en Artois, close Arras in the north.
I’ve got 3 brothers and 1 sister : One of them is a 19 year-old person and the others are 15 like me. In fact, we are quadruplets.
I’m quite tall. I look like my father because we’ve got the same eyes which are brown. Maybe I’m a bit slim. I’m not very messy and talkative [comme tu pourras le constater]. I’m a bit lazy. I like people who are polite whereas I don’t get on well with people who are selfish.
I’m fond of animals for example marmots. I’m keen on playing video games and chatting with my friends. I’m into chatting on the Internet and send SMS or e-mails. Are you an MSN adress ? I prefer skiing than cycling or racing. I can’t stand sunbathing. Besides I can’t bear listening to diam’s, a rap woman singer. Contrary to you who love the rap wheras me no. I don’t practise any extracurricular activities .
I played the guitar mais I kept on it because [je n’avais plus le temps]..
My first foreign language is English and my second is Spanish.
I go to school by train that’s why I get up early like you nevertheless I haven’t got a job during the week-end.
I’m really looking forward to you.
@+
Y a t-il des fautes ?
voilà mon texte.
Hi Alisdair !
I’ve just received your mail that’s why I am writing this mail.
You asked me to introduce myself consequently I introduce myself and my family.
So, my name is …. and I was born on 24 January, 199.. wheras you you are 15. I’m aquarian .
I live in Vitry en Artois, close Arras in the north.
I’ve got 3 brothers and 1 sister : One of them is a 19 year-old person and the others are 15 like me. In fact, we are quadruplets.
I’m quite tall. I look like my father because we’ve got the same eyes which are brown. Maybe I’m a bit slim. I’m not very messy and talkative [comme tu pourras le constater]. I’m a bit lazy. I like people who are polite whereas I don’t get on well with people who are selfish.
I’m fond of animals for example marmots. I’m keen on playing video games and chatting with my friends. I’m into chatting on the Internet and send SMS or e-mails. Are you an MSN adress ? I prefer skiing than cycling or racing. I can’t stand sunbathing. Besides I can’t bear listening to diam’s, a rap woman singer. Contrary to you who love the rap wheras me no. I don’t practise any extracurricular activities .
I played the guitar mais I kept on it because [je n’avais plus le temps]..
My first foreign language is English and my second is Spanish.
I go to school by train that’s why I get up early like you nevertheless I haven’t got a job during the week-end.
I’m really looking forward to you.
@+
Y a t-il des fautes ?