traduction en english

[tulipe06]

née à long island et ayant été élevée par sa mère chanteuse d'opera, Mariah Carey ne perd pas de temps et déménage à New york, à l'age de 17 ans, une journée aprés avoir reçu son diplôme de l'école secondaire. elle arrive dans la métropole avec l'intention de réussir dans le monde de la musique. elle rencontre le claviériste Ben Margulies avec qui elle compose des chansons. C'est lorqu'elle fait des choeurs pour un enregistrement en studio de brenda K. Starr qu'elle est decouverte. La chanteuse donne démo de carey à tomy mottola, alors president de columbia records lors d'une fête. la legende veut que mottola ait écouté le démo dans sa limousine en retournant et qu'il ait été trés impressionné qu'il a alors fait demi-tour pour la retrouver en fête.

Apres avoir signé un contrat avec Columbia, la chanteuse entre en studio pour enregistrer son premier album qui paraît en 1990.beaucoup de succés avec les piéces "vision of love" "someday".

en juin 1993, Carey se marie avec tommy mottola. quelques mois plus tard, elle est de retour avec "music box" qui a connu les meilleures ventes à ce jour.

Apres s'être séparée de mottola, carey revient avec "butterfly" en 1997 qui remporte, un enorme succés. l'année 1999 marque la sortie de "rainbow" dont le premier simple "heartbreaker". ainsi carey devient la premiere artiste a atteindre le numero 1 a chaque année. l'album lui permet aussi de dépasser les Beatles.

s'il vous plait quelqun pourait me traduire ce texte en anglais
merciii

[Clémentine]

Voilà :



Born in Long Island and raised by her mother, an opera singer, Mariah Carey doesn't lose time and move to New York by the time she turns 17, on the day after Graduation. She arrives in the big city with the will to success in music. She meets the board player Ben Margulies with who she starts composing. She is noticed while taking part in the studio recording session of Brend K Starr as a chorus member. The singer give Mariah's demo to Tomy Mottola, then president of Columbia Records, at a party. The legend says that Tomy Mottola listened to the demo in his limo on his way back and was so impressed he made a u-turn to go back to the party and see her.

After having signed a contract with Colombia, the singer makes her first record, it is released in 1990 and is very successul, it is above all the "Vision of love" and "Someday" tracks that seduced the public.

In June 1993, Cary marries Tommy Mottola. A few months later, she's back with "Music Box", her best sale until today.

After have split with Mottola, Carey comes back with 'Butterfly" in 1997, very succesful record too. In 1999 the "Rainbow" album is released with its first single "Heartbreaker". Carey becomes then the first artist to be #1 on the charts every year. With this album, she also beat the Beatles.

[dYShock]

Je corrige (du mieux que je peux) :

Born in Long Island and raised by her mother, opera singer Mariah Carey lost no time and moved to New York at age 17, the day after Graduation. She arrives in the metropolis with the will to succeed in music. She met the keyboardist Ben Margulies whom she started composing with. She was noticed while taking part in Brend K Starr's studio recording session as a chorus member. The singer gave Mariah's demo to Tomy Mottola, then to the president of Columbia Records during a party. The legend says that Tomy Mottola listened to the demo in his limo on his way back and was so impressed he made a U-turn to go back to the party and see her.

After she signed a contract with Colombia, the singer made her first record, which was released in 1990 and was very successful, especially with the tracks "Vision of Love" and "Someday".

In June 1993, Carey married Tommy Mottola. A few months later, she made a come back with "Music Box", her current best seller.

After she split up with Mottola, Carey came back again with 'Butterfly" in 1997, which was very succesful record as well. In 1999 the album "Rainbow" was released with its first single "Heartbreaker". Carey then became the first artist to be #1 every year. With this album, she also beat the Beatles.


Je souligne qu'en anglais, le texte doit être écrit au passé et non au présent.

[ANTHOS]

Born in Long Island and raised by her opera singer mother, Mariah Carey lost no time and moved to New York at the age of 17, the day after obtaining her high school diploma(je pense) She arrived in the metropolis with a determination to succeed in music. She met the keyboardist Ben Margulies, with whom she started composing. She was discovered in a chorus during a recording session at Brend K Starr's studio. The singer gave Mariah's demo to the then President of Columbia Records, Tomy Mottola, during a party. Legend has it that after leaving, Tomy Mottola listened to the demo in his limousine and was so impressed that he returned to the party to find her.

After signing a contract with Colombia, the singer returned to the studio to record her first album, released in 1990 and which was very successful, especially the tracks "Vision of Love" and "Someday".

In June 1993, Carey married Tommy Mottola. A few months later, she hit the charts again with "Music Box", which is her bestselling album to date (je suppose album pas single).

After splitting up with Mottola, Carey renewed her success with 'Butterfly" in 1997, which was also successful. In 1999, the album "Rainbow" was released with its first single "Heartbreaker" (texte original un peu confus là il me semble). So Carey became the first artist to be #1 every year(c'est le bon sens??). With this album, she also overtook the Beatles.

[Cati]

Bonsoir!

Dans le texte d'origine c'est la mère de Mariah Carey qui est chanteuse d'opéra et dans la traduction finale, c'est Mariah Carey... A l'oreille, la proposition de Clémentine me paraît plus juste...Qu'en pensez-vous? C'est juste une virgule qui manque ou autre chose?

[dYShock]

Bonsoir!

Dans le texte d'origine c'est la mère de Mariah Carey qui est chanteuse d'opéra et dans la traduction finale, c'est Mariah Carey... A l'oreille, la proposition de Clémentine me paraît plus juste...Qu'en pensez-vous? C'est juste une virgule qui manque ou autre chose?

Ohh, mon erreur, j'ai mal lu. Changez la première phrase pour :

Born in Long Island and raised by her mother, an opera singer, Mariah Carey [...].

J'ai interprété "an opera singer, Maria Carey" comme si ça voulait dire « une chanteuse d'opéra, du nom de Maria Carey, ... ».

[ANTHOS]

bien vu Cati ! J'ai vérifié contre le texte originel cette fois ci et modifié mon texte ci-dessus

tulipe06, tu est vraiment gatée !