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My first experience as politic journalist was during the war in ex-Yugoslavia. I got six years experience. There I built strength conviction that peace is the most important value to help people for living better. I saw and testimony of the work of DPKN in Kosovo. I would be proud to become one of yours.

Several influent media delegated me authority to draft and analyse events relating to political issues in that area. I am a highly motivated and confident professional with a proven media release. To prepare my article I’m able to research information from a wide variety of sources: press, communications, publications, institutions, government, military, NGO’s bodies and civilian. I also do interview with the big sense of listening and understanding. On the field, sometimes I brief some journalists who just come in the area. Working on television I assist the chief editor for the news doing background papers or talking points at the news conference. There, as a TV editor I also monitoring political, socio-economic, and other politically relevant developments from the international community. I feel confident that my previous experience working as political journalist will enable me to quickly contribute to your Political Affairs Office.

My University degree “Bachelors in political science” gave me a strong capacity for analysing and good understanding of political sciences especially international relations. I have an analytical mind with ability to identify problems, i.e., political, ethnic, racial, social, economic, etc., causing civil unrest in a country or geographic area. That was the case when I’ve worked on the field in Serbia, also in Afghanistan and in the TV-RFO where I worked with different ultramarine’s communities. Analysing social facts about current political events, trends, issues and people, create reports for broadcast , identify the sources, enquiries, analysis, collect, process, and synthesise data’s from the field. As usually but particularly when I travelled in Afghanistan, I plan and organise with the ability to establish priorities and to plan, co-ordinate and monitor own work plan, even in conflict (Kosovo, Afghanistan). I’m a self motivated person, tenacious and resourceful, working on own initiative or as a strong and effective team member. My good interpersonal skills permitted me to manage professional relationship with international staff like in Kosovo with the UNMIK, NATO, HCR, and met a lot of government bodies making interviews (in Serbia for example General Vuk Obradovic, one the opponent of S. Milosevic), but also in Afghanistan where one of those was the representative of the UN office for drug control and crime prevention. In Peshawar, in refugees camps “Jaloused”, I collected personal testimony, and people get confident with me because I have sensitivity and respect for all people whatever national and cultural backgrounds. I have excellent people communication (writing / speaking) and negotiations skills with the ability to build and sustain professional relationship across all level, developing a real understanding of human and partner’s needs.

My mother tong is French and Serb, I’m fluently speaking and writing English.

I am eager to apply my background and strengths to the Peace I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to further discuss how my qualifications match the associate political affairs officer position. You can reach by email: jsnejana [...@...] yahoo [point, F, R] or cell phone: 00 33 6 21 36 45 35. I thank you for reviewing my application.

I am fully prepared to be available for interview at your convenience.

I look forward to meeting you.

Yours faithfully,

1. Merci d'indiquer la langue dans le titre.

2. Ne laissez JAMAIS une adresse courielle traîner sur un forum sans la "troubler" le plus possible ! Le net est plein de robots invisibles qui détectent automatiquement toutes les adresses pour ensuite les pourrir d'une façon ou d'une autre.

Rapidement, quelques petites fautes:

janana wrote:
My first experience as a political journalist was during the war in ex-Yugoslavia. I got six years experience. There I built strong conviction that peace is the most important value to help people looking for a better life. I saw and testified the work of DPKN in Kosovo. I would be proud to become one of yours.

Several influential media delegated me authority to draft and analyse events relating to political issues in this area. I am a highly motivated and confident professional with a proven media release (Qu'est ce que tu veux dire ici? je mettrais "experience" tout simplement). To prepare my article I’m able to research information from a wide variety of sources: press, communications, publications, institutions, government, military, NGO’s bodies and civilian. I also do interviews with a big sense of listening and understanding. On the field, sometimes I brief some journalists who just came to the area. Working on television I assist the chief editor for the news doing background papers or talking points at the news conference. There, as a TV editor I also monitor political, socio-economic, and other politically relevant developments from the international community. I feel confident that my previous experience working as a political journalist will enable me to quickly contribute to your Political Affairs Office.

My University degree “Bachelors in Political Science” gave me a strong capacity for the analysis and good understanding of political sciences especially international relations. I have an analytical mind with ability to identify problems, i.e., political, ethnic, racial, social, economic, etc., causing civil unrest in a country or a geographical area. That was the case when I worked on the field in Serbia, in Afghanistan and in the TV-RFO where I worked with different overseas communities. Analysing social facts about current political events, trends, issues and people, creating reports for broadcast , identifying sources and enquiries, analysis (deja dit non?), collecting, processing, and synthesizing field data. For example when I travelled in Afghanistan, I planed and organised with the ability to establish priorities and to plan, co-ordinate and monitor our work plan, even in a conflict (Kosovo, Afghanistan). I am a self motivated person, tenacious and resourceful, working on own initiative or as a strong and effective team member. My good interpersonal skills permitted me to manage professional relationship with international staff like in Kosovo with the UNMIK, NATO, HCR, and to meet a lot of government bodies making interviews (in Serbia for example General Vuk Obradovic, one the opponent of S. Milosevic), but also in Afghanistan where one of those was the representative of the UN office for drug control and crime prevention. In Peshawar, in refugees camps “Jaloused”, I collected personal testimonies, and people get confident with me because I have sensitivity and respect for all people whatever their national and cultural backgrounds are. I have excellent people communication (writing / speaking) and negotiation skills with the ability to build and sustain professional relationship across all levels, developing a real understanding of human and partner’s needs.

My mother tongues are French and Serb, I am fluently speaking and writing English.

I am eager to apply my background and strengths to the Peace ponctuation? I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to further discuss how my qualifications match with the Associate Political Affairs Officer position. You can reach by email: jsnejana [...@...] yahoo [point, F, R] or cell phone: 00 33 6 21 36 45 35. Thank you for considering my application.

I am available for an interview at your convenience.

I am looking forward to meeting you.

Yours faithfully,

Bonjour Janana

J'ai amélioré ton texte ci-dessous. Il y avait quelques petites fautes, rien de grave. Commentaires et modifs majeures en rouge. L'orthographe est parfaite.



My first experience as a political journalist was during the war in Yugoslavia. I gained six years of experience. There, I built a strong conviction that peace is the most important value to help people live better. I saw and testimony [???] of the work of DPKN in Kosovo. I would be proud to become part of your organisation.

Several influential media companies delegated me authority to draft and analyse events relating to political issues in that area. I am a highly motivated and confident professional with a proven media release. To prepare an article, I’m able to research information from a wide variety of sources: press, communications, publications, institutions, government, military, NGOs and civilians. I also carry out interviews with a sense of listening and understanding. In the field, I sometimes brief journalists who have just arrived in the area. Working in television, I assisted the Editor-in-Chief for the news doing background papers or talking points [???] at the news conference. There, as a TV editor, I also monitored political, socio-economic, and other politically relevant developments from[or for?] the international community. I feel confident that my previous experience working as a political journalist will enable me to quickly contribute to your Political Affairs Office.

My university degree “Bachelor's in Political Science” gave me a strong capacity for analysing and a good understanding of political sciences especially international relations. I have an analytical mind with the ability to identify problems, i.e., political, ethnic, racial, social, economic, etc., causing civil unrest in a country or geographic area. That was the case when I worked in the field in Serbia, also in Afghanistan and in the TV-RFO, where I worked with different ultramarine’s[???] communities. Analysing social facts about current political events, trends, issues and people, create reports for broadcast , identify the sources, enquiries, analysis, collect, process, and synthesise data’s from the field.[texte manquant dernier phrase/pas de coherence -ing puis non -ing formes] I plan and organise with the ability to establish priorities and to plan, co-ordinate and monitor my own work plan, even in conflict zones (Kosovo, Afghanistan). I’m a self- motivated person, tenacious and resourceful, work on my own initiative or as a strong and effective team member. My good interpersonal skills permitted me to manage professional relationships with international staff like in Kosovo with the UNMIK, NATO, HCR, to meet a lot of government bodies, do interviews (in Serbia, for example, with General Vuk Obradovic, one the opponents of S. Milosevic), but also in Afghanistan where one of those was the representative of the UN office for drug control and crime prevention. In Peshawar, in the “Jaloused” refugees camps , I collected personal testimonies, and people gained trust in me because I have sensitivity and respect for all people whatever their national and cultural backgrounds. I have excellent people communication (writing / speaking) and negotiations skills with the ability to build and sustain professional relationships across all levels, developing a real understanding of human and partner’s needs.[what do you mean?]

My mother tongues are French and Serbian, and I speak and write English fluently.

I am eager to apply my background and strengths to the peace cause and I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to further discuss how my qualifications match the associate political affairs officer position. You can reach by email: jsnejana [...@...] yahoo [point, F, R] or cell phone: 00 33 6 21 36 45 35. I thank you for reviewing my application.

I am available for interview at your convenience.

I look forward to meeting you.

Yours faithfully,
[Yours sincerely si tu connais le nom de la personne]