LokaNova et Freelang

Bonsoir à tous, j'ai fait un exercice en anglais mais je ne sais pas dutout si mes phrases sont bien construites, etc
Je fais donc appelle à vous afin de me corriger si possible.
merci d'avance!

exercice:

A- here are some answers based on the information in the warm-up. Ask suitable questions:

1- a wooden ramp at ellis island
>>> what did you see when you arrived at ellis island?
2- between 1892 and 1954.
>>> when did people immigrate in america?
3- Various diseases.
>>> Why did everybody cannot througout health's examination?
4- with a button-hook.
>>> How did the turn you lids over to look in?
5- You were refused entry.
>>>What happened when you was ill?
6-A card.
>>> (qu'est-ce qu'ils te donnent quand tu vas en détention ? )
7- for months
>>> How long did they stay in detention?
8- Because they were in America now
>>> why didn't they have sorrows?
9- E,L or X.
>>> How did they label people?
10- Because they thought they had made a mistake
>>> (Pourquoi est-ce que j'ai pu rentrer immédiatement ?)

B-
Imagine you are an immigrant going through ellis island with your family at the beginning of century. Expressing your hopes, fears, sorrows and happiness.

>>>
In 1916, my parents decided to take the boat and going to america and I had follow them. In the boat, conditions was horrible and had got many people. When we had finished the travel. I was relieved but a new problem arrived; the entry examination. Even if my mother had reassure me, I was afraid of button hook. But once we had entry for the america, i was very happy.

voila, je pense qu'il y a énormément de faute... aidez moi svp.

Bonjour, quelques corrections en rouge! (déformation professionnelle??? omigod! )



exercice:

A- here are some answers based on the information in the warm-up. Ask suitable questions:

1- a wooden ramp at ellis island
>>> What did you see when you arrived at Ellis Island?
2- between 1892 and 1954.
>>> When did people immigrate to America?
3- Various diseases.
>>> Why did everybody cannot througout health's examination?Why did everybody have to go undertake a thorough health examination?
4- with a button-hook.
>>> How did the turn you eyelidslids over to look into your eyes?
5- You were refused entry.
>>>What happened when you were ill?
6-A card.
>>> (qu'est-ce qu'ils te donnent quand tu vas en détention ? ) What did they give you when you were sent into detention?
7- for months
>>> How long did they stay in detention?
8- Because they were in America now
>>> Why didn't they have sorrows?/ Why weren't they upset?
9- E,L or X.
>>> How did they label people?
10- Because they thought they had made a mistake
>>> (Pourquoi est-ce que j'ai pu rentrer immédiatement ?) Why was I allowed in straight away?

B-
Imagine you are an immigrant going through ellis island with your family at the beginning of century. Expressing your hopes, fears, sorrows and happiness.

>>>
In 1916, my parents decided to take the boat and go to America and I had to follow them. In the boat, conditions were horrible and there were many people. When we had finished the trip. I was relieved but a new problem arrived; the entry examination. Even if my mother had reassured me, I was afraid of the button hook. But once we had entry to Amercica , i was very happy.

voila, je pense qu'il y a énormément de faute... aidez moi svp.[/quote]







En fait, je trouve que c'est pas trop mal mais faites attention aux majuscules (en Anglais c'est une grosse faute!) et aux accords!

C'est un peu tôt pour faire des exercices d'anglais non? La rentrée n'est que la semaine prochaine!

Bon courage
Claudine

4- with a button-hook.
>>> How did the turn you eyelidslids over to look into your eyes?

Plutôt: "How did they turn your eyelids...", non?

merci beaucoup pour la correction, je me lance dans les révisions en ce moment avant la rentrée.

ça me donne du baume au coeur... Si seulement les miens étaient comme vous!