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bonjour, je voudrais que vous me corrigiez mes fautes s'il vous plait. Merci

We will present you a beautiful movie:
“Kramer Vs Kramer”

Presentation
This is an American film realized in 1979 by Robert Benton.
Mains characters
First, we will make a presentation of the main characters of this movie.
There is Johanna, interpreted by Meryl Streep, who is Miss Kramer the housewife and the wife of Ted Kramer, interpreted by Dustin Hoffman. They have a child who named Billy and who is 5 years old.

What about?
This is a story about the divorce in 80’s. We will resume the story. Ted is a brilliant business man and his work keeps him busy in goal of support his family. So, one evening, when he comes back after work on his house, his wife, Johanna, take his bagages and go back. She says him she is boring about her family life: as much her wife life as her mother life. Ted is surprised and he thinks she will come back. She won’t and he has to become a single father for his son. With time, he learns to become a good father and we can see an evolution of the rapport between Ted and Billy.
As he takes charge after Billy, he begins to be late at work, to be devolved during work time. His boss prefers dismissal him because he lost a big client for his society. And in the same time, Johanna comes back to ask for a divorce and to give the custody of Billy.

Voici ce que j'ai réussi à corriger. Il y a deux passages dont le sens m'échappe totalement, je n'ai donc pas pu les corriger.


We will present you a beautiful movie:
“Kramer Vs Kramer”

Presentation
This is an American film directed in 1979 by Robert Benton.
Main characters
First, we will introduce the main characters of this movie. There is Johanna, portrayed by Meryl Streep, who is Miss Kramer the housewife and the wife of Ted Kramer, portrayed by Dustin Hoffman. They have a child whose name is named Billy and who is 5 years old.

Storyline
This is a story about divorce in the 80’s. We will explain the story briefly. Ted is a brilliant businessman and he works very hard in order to help his family. One evening, when he comes back home after work, his wife, Johanna, [take his bagages and go back] [ne comprends pas]. She tells him she is bored of her family life: as much about her wife life as her mother life. Ted is surprised and he thinks she will come back. She never does and he has to raise his son alone. With time, he learns to become a good father and we can see an evolution in the relationship between Ted and Billy.
As he takes charge of Billy, he starts being late at work, [to be devolved during work time] [ne comprends pas]. His boss fires him because he lost an important client for his society. And in the meantime , Johanna comes back to ask for a divorce and to give the custody of Billy.

merci quels sont les passages qui vous échappe? en bleu?

ok j'ai vu alors ca veut dire la première phrase en bleu prend ses bagages et quitte la maison.
Et la seconde c'est être absent dans le sens penser qu'à son fils durant son travail.

Alors :

One evening, when he comes back home after work, his wife, Johanna, is packing her stuff and leaves home for good.

As he takes charge of Billy, he starts being late at work and is becoming less effective during work time.

C'est le mieux que je peux faire.