LokaNova et Freelang

Voila, je pars a Malte la semaine prochaine et j'ai besoin d'envoyer des Cv et lettres de motivation
Voici la lettre de motivation que j'ai réalisé en anglais
pouvez vous me dire si j'ai fait beaucoup d'erreurs
merci beaucoup

The international repute of your company as its excellent services lead me to propose my candidature.

I pursued various studies which have led me to obtain a BTS in Agriculture.
I then acquired a certificate of specialization in organic farming.

Trereafter, I worked for six months in a bar where I officiated all alone.
My tasks were to carry out the opening of the bar, to serve, carry out the pieces of housework and to occupy me of the case.

I al thus a hard-working preson with a relational good, the direction of the trade and especially a person to which one can make confidence.

Moreover, I decided to discover the Eupoean Community, to improve my knowledge of the English language, my choice directed myself towards the island of Malta.
I am been willing to discover any other trade having faculty to adapt me very easily.

I thus will be resident in Malta from January 12, as of this date I am available for a maintenace in order to propose my services.

Lastly, I am very interested by all the trades which relates to the sport.
I have been me even laid off of a football team for now five yeras, before I had practised seven years of judo.

I am thus impassionned of sport, I keep up to date daily whith the sprot news by the means of sporting magazines and othersproting sites on internet.

This is why, I request near you the possibility of obtaining a station answering my request.
I thank you and asks you to accept the insurrance of my sincerity.

voici une améloriation du texte ( si tu es toujours là)... les parties soulignées sont incomprehensibles (je me doute que un traducteur automatique a contribué à certains endroits). dans tous les cas, si l'anglais est important dans le poste visé, tu devras le travailler !!!


The international reputation of your company and its excellent services lead me to make this application.

My studies culminated in a BTS in Agriculture and then a certificate of specialization in organic farming.

Thereafter, I worked for six months in a bar, often alone. My tasks were to open the bar, to serve customers, do housework and to occupy me of the case. I am thus a hard-working preson with good social skills, the direction of the trade and most of all trustworthy.

Moreover, I have decided to discover the Euroopean Community, to improve my knowledge of English and my choice turned towards the island of Malta.

I will be resident in Malta from January 12: as of this date I am available for a maintenace in order to propose my services.

I am particularly interested by all professions related to sport. I have been me even laid off of a football team for now five years, and before I practised judo for seven years. In short, sport is my passion. I keep up to date daily with sports news by reading the press and the internet.

However, I am flexible and am willing to enter another trade, as I am able to adapt me very easily.

This is why, I request the possibility of obtaining a position with XXXcompanynameXXX.

I thank you in advance for your attention.

merci beaucoup je vais retravaillé cela
encore merci