LokaNova et Freelang

Sujet: Monroe says:" if you are black, there is an artificial ceiling over your head.". Explain what he means.



This message is aimed at all the blacks persons. Through these words, we can see ha was a vitim of discrimination and racism during his career. The blacks are still and always badly received,, they constitute a category to part. Even if people doesn't show it explicity, they remain hypocritical and have prejudices defined well to these people of differents colours. For the whites, the blacksare more violent and less intelligent and hardworkink. The whites doesn't judge the blacks in their just value. To make a success of career is possible but it will be nevertheless always injustices which are more or less disressing for people who want it a lot. It is not necessary ti be made of illusion, the blacks can not reach the height they arise from a different culture and values compared with whites. This message means clearly that it doen't much matter the competence, the blacks are every victims of discriminations

La demande, le message, les erreurs, tout est là sauf la politesse

Je suis désolé, sa faisais tellement longtemps que je travaillais que j'ai oublié de vous prier de bien vouloir m'aider si vous aviez du temps et de vous remercier par avance. Excusé moi encore, ce n'est pas dans mes habitudes. Merci de votre compréhension

Voilà, les réponses ne tarderont probablement pas

SubEspion wrote:Voilà, les réponses ne tarderont probablement pas

A priori, il y en a qui ne tiennent pas leurs engagements...

une petite politesse feon avance larrivee des reponse! allez un effort!

SubEspion wrote:Voilà, les réponses ne tarderont probablement pas

Tu peux peut-être déjà aider ? Il me semble que certaines erreurs sont assez évidentes... même pour un non-natif.

Elody s'est reprise... et n'est pas de mauvaise foi, à nous de lui rendre la politesse maintenant

This message is aimed at all black persons. Through these words, we can
see that he was a victim of discrimination and racism during his career.
Blacks are still and always badly received, they form a fully-fledged
category. Even if people doesn't show their explanation, they remain
hypocritical and have prejudices clearly defined to these people of a
different colour. For the Whites, Blacks are manual workers, less clever
and violent. Whites don't judge Blacks in their values. Making a success
in his career is possible but there will be always injustices which are
more or less disregarding people who want to success a lot. It's not
necessary to delude oneself, Blacks cannot reach the top, they come
from different cultures and values which are compared with the Whites.

This message means clearly that the competence doesn't have much
matter, the Blacks are very discrimination victims.

Je ne suis vraiment pas certain de ce que j'incinue là-dessus (c'est tout
de même la première fois que je traduis un texte en anglais sur ce
forum) mais j'espère que ça aide...

Latinus wrote:
Elody s'est reprise... et n'est pas de mauvaise foi, à nous de lui rendre la politesse maintenant

oui tu as raison

This message is aimed at all the blacks persons

This message is aimed to all (the) black persons

we can see ha was a vitim of... during his career.

(that) he was a victim of ... during his whole career.

The blacks

the Black people

they constitute a category to part

que veu tu dire?

the whites

the white people

the blacksare

black people are

less intelligent and hardworkink.

hardworker

in their just value

appropriatly

To make a success of career is possible

it is possible to have a succesful career

it will be nevertheless always injustices

there will always have injustices (je ne sui pas sure la!!)

who want it a lot

who really wants it

it doen't much matter

it does not matter

voila ce que je peu faire pour linstant je ne compren pas tt le texte avce les faute se nes pass tjs tres comprehensible!

leelou wrote:This message is aimed to all (the) black persons

Euh non, il me semble bien que c'est "to aim at"


it is possible to have a successful career

there will always have injustices

There will always be

merci deme corriger koko au final jappren aussi!!

leelou wrote:merci deme corriger koko au final jappren aussi!!

c'est magique un forum, non ?

Elody wrote:Sujet: Monroe says:" if you are black, there is an artificial ceiling over your head.". Explain what he means.



This message is aimed at all the blacks persons. Through these words, we can see ha was a vitim of discrimination and racism during his career. The blacks are still and always badly received,, they constitute a category to part. Even if people doesn't show it explicity, they remain hypocritical and have prejudices defined well to these people of differents colours. For the whites, the blacksare more violent and less intelligent and hardworkink. The whites doesn't judge the blacks in their just value. To make a success of career is possible but it will be nevertheless always injustices which are more or less disressing for people who want it a lot. It is not necessary to be made of illusion, Black people can not reach the height they arise from a different culture and values compared to the White. This message means clearly that it doen't much matter the competence, the blacks are every victims of discriminations

the blacks persons : Black people

ha was a vitim : he was a victim

The blacks are still and always : Black people were always and still be

,, they constitute a category to part : . They form a very seperate category

Even if people doesn't : Even though people don't

defined well to : well defined on

differents : different

the whites : White people

the blacksare : the Black are


hardworkink : hardworking

The whites doesn't : The White don't

the blacks in their just value : the Black ... appropriately

To make a success of career : Making a successful career

but it will be nevertheless always injustices : but (nevertheless) there will always be injustices

that it doen't much matter the competence : that the competence doesn't matter much

the blacks are every victims of discriminations : Almost all Black people are victims of discrimination.

Je ne suis pas sûre de tout. Donc une relecture serait fort appréciée.