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[FR -> EN] Checking of a synthesis.

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FR : J'ai fait une synthèse sur le Spam et je voudrais savoir si mon langage est correct merci. J'aimerais que ceci soit effectué le plus rapidement possible.
Si vous jugez necessaire d'ajouter des elements n'hésitez pas mais merci de me les signaler.

EN : I made a synthesis on the Spam and I would like to know if my language is correct thanks. I would like that this is carried out as soon as possible. If you consider it necessary to add elements do not hesitate but thank you to announce them to me.

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STOPPING UNWANTED MAILS

Spamming is an advertising technique whose aim is to flood lots of e-mails in your mail box with a view to forcing you to go to see their products.

The products are often about sex, Like "Do You Want A BIGGER PENIS ???" or the famous eternal youth.Or you are offered the "friendship" of a Russian Lady.
In The picture, the symbole of the spammer is the toy getting out from the screen represented as a surprise. However spam is nowadays everywhere and it is ironical to compare Spam to a Surprise.

In USA, there are local laws in several states obliging spammers to mark their massages "ADV" with a view to permitting net surfers delete them easily, though few obey. Now the U.S Congress wants to stop this or control Spam by federal law. In fact, Spam is a real problem lots of compagny recieve more spam ads than mails from thier customers. It is a problem because these compagnies have already enought administrative work without having sorted the important mails from their customers and the ads.

It is the same way for the private individuals. Do you like surfing on the net surronded by pics of sex and indecent proposals in popup ?
Each times that you propagate chains of mails you give many e-mail adress to the spammers. Besides , when you registrate to a web site, it could give your e-mail adress in exchange of money. As the system of rescencement of your needs by the advertisers calling exchanges.

There are lots of tools to stop spam but the anti-spam compagny sell them for a very expensive price and the upgrades too , in fact, spammers evolves with anti-spam tools and these tools often need upgrades moreover, anti-spam compagny spam you with their own new products. It is really paradoxical.

With the difference of the real mail box you can't put a post - it to notice postman that you don't want ads in your mail box , you are obliging to accept ads in your cyber mail box.

On the other hand, experts say spammers will simply send their messages from somewhere if the U.S Congress could control spam. It is the example by default of the World Of Consomation in which we live. We must buy, always buy and again buy, to force us to buy somethings they stuff OUr head by mass unwanted e-mail in the world wide web.
It is the first law today : we have to make money with all items possible.
FR : Voila ma synthese de document si vous voyez de nouvelle "ouverture" vous avez libre droit d'ajouter des elements pour ouvrir encore un peu plus cette synthese.[/code]
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Euh j'ai oublié de me logguer pour poster ce message.
DOnc voila c'est moi qui vient de le poster.
Si vous avez des questions sur le sens de certaine phrases n'hesitez pas je suis a l'affu de vos reponses.
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Re: [FR -> EN] Checking of a synthesis.

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I am a French-speaker but I will try to write it in English.
Hamomo wrote:(...)
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STOPPING UNWANTED MAILS

Spamming is an advertising technique (...)

The products are often about (...).
In The picture, (...).

In USA, there are local laws in several states
obliging spammers to mark their massages "ADV" with a view to permitting net surfers delete them easily, though few obey. Now the U.S Congress wants to stop this or control Spam by federal law. In fact, Spam is a real problem lots of compagny recieve more spam ads than mails from thier customers. It is a problem because these compagnies have already enought administrative work without having sorted the important mails from their customers and the ads.

(...).
(...)
obliging : however the verb to oblige exists, I think you better wrote:
(...) there are local laws in several states constraining spammers (...)

massages -> messages (what they call in French «une coquille»)
recieve -> receive (again «une coquille»)
thier -> their (again «une coquille»)
enought -> enough (again «une coquille»)
Hamomo wrote:(...)
Text to Check
STOPPING UNWANTED MAILS

Spamming is an advertising technique (...)

The products are often about (...).
In The picture, (...).

In USA, there are local laws in several states (...).

It is the same way for the private individuals. (...).

There are lots of tools to stop spam (...).

With the difference of the real mail box (...).

On the other hand, experts say spammers will simply send their messages from somewhere if the U.S Congress could control spam. It is the example by default of the
World Of Consomation in which we live. We must buy, always buy and again buy, to force us to buy somethings they stuff OUr head by mass unwanted e-mail in the world wide web.
It is the first law today : we have to make money with all items possible.
FR : Voila ma synthese de document si vous voyez de nouvelle "ouverture" vous avez libre droit d'ajouter des elements pour ouvrir encore un peu plus cette synthese.[/code]

I am puzzled with the expression World Of Consomation. Do you mean the french expression société de consommation ? I searched on the Web and I think the translation of this should be consumer society.

Have a nice day. Bonne journée !

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ok thanks
I am a french speaker too ;-)
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Anonymous wrote:ok thanks
I am a french speaker too ;-)
[FRENCH]Oui, je le sais, mais cela accroît vos chances de recevoir des remarques de la part d'anglophones.[/FRENCH]

[ENGLISH]Yes I know, but writing in English increases your chances to get pertinent remarks.[/ENGLISH]

:hello:
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DONE
Thanks a lot.
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STOPPING UNWANTED MAILS

Spamming is an advertising technique whose aim is to flood lots of e-mails in your mail box with a view to forcing you to go to see their products. That (whose is used for someone, not something like spamming) aims at flooding your mailbox with emails in order to have you go and see... (with a view to... not used a lot if at all).

The products are often about sex, like "Do You Want A BIGGER PENIS ???" or about the famous eternal youth (the eternal youth not being about sex...).Or you are offered the "friendship" of a Russian Lady. I remember getting a lot of spam for getting free diplomas and such...In The picture, the symbole of the spammer is the toy getting out from the screen represented as a surprise. (In The picture??? What is that supposed to mean?) However spam is nowadays everywhere and it is ironical to compare Spam to a Surprise.

In the USA, there are local laws in several states obliging (same thing as Pierre about the verb) spammers to mark their messages "ADV" with a view to permitting in order to permit net surfers to delete them easily, though few obey (what do you mean? Do you mean that you should have to delete spam from your mailbox???). Now the U.S Congress wants to stop this or control Spam by federal law. In fact, Spam is a real problem: lots of compagny companies receive more spam ads than mails from their customers. It is a problem, because these compagnies have already enough administrative work without having to sorted sort the ads from the important mails from their customers. (to sort something from something else)

It is the same way for the (delete "the" and "way") private individuals. Do you like surfing on the net surrounded by pics (depending on what you’re writing it for, pics is not always the best choice; pictures is fine) of sex and indecent proposals (make sure proposal is not just for “Will you marry me?” questions... hehe) in popup?
Each times (singular) that you propagate (?? Not great but I can’t find another verb right now...) a chain of mails you give the spammers many e-mail adresses (but there’s a difference between chains of mails and spams, isn’t there?). Besides, when you registrate to (registrate on a web site or suscribe to a newsletter) a web site, it could give your e-mail adress in exchange of for money. As the system of rescencement (where did you find that?? not in the dictionnary...) of your needs by the advertisers calling exchanges (didn’t understand the whole phrase at all).

There are lots of tools to stop spam but the anti-spam compagny (shouldn’t it be a plural? Or is there only one anti-spam company?) sell them for a very expensive price and the upgrades too. In fact, spammers evolves with anti-spam tools and these tools often need upgrades. Moreover, anti-spam compagnynies spam you with their own new products: it is really paradoxical (I’d say “it is quite a contradiction”).

With the difference of the real mail box you can't put a post - it to notice postman that you don't want ads in your mail box , you are obliging to accept ads in your cyber mail box. ?? Sorry?????

On the other hand, experts say spammers will simply send their messages from somewhere else if the U.S Congress could control spam. It is the example by default (??) of the World Of Consomation consumer society in which we live. We must buy, always buy and again buy, to force us to buy somethings they stuff OUr head by mass unwanted e-mail in the world wide web. Not very good sentence, don’t have time to re-write it but good luck any way...
It is the first law today : we have to make money with all possible items.

Sorry pal, but did you look up your vocabulary in the dictionnary???
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Anonymous/Invité/Guest wrote:
STOPPING UNWANTED MAILS

Spamming is an advertising technique (...)

The products are often about sex (...).

In the USA, (...)

It is the same way for the (delete "the" and "way") private individuals. (...) Each times (singular) that you propagate (?? Not great but I can’t find another verb right now...) a chain of mails you give the spammers many e-mail adresses (...)

There are lots of tools to stop spam (...)

With the difference of the real mail box (...)
(...)
Suggestion: Each time that you broadcast a chain of mails you give the spammers many e-mail adresses
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