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La-cosca
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Post by La-cosca »

merci pour votre aide, et lol, au passage heureuze que mon post ait déclenché une série de petit "amusements entre amis" lol...

tiens et au passage si vous avez encore un peu de temps à me consacrer, est-ce que vous auriez une idée pour alléger ma phrase (en gardant le sens et les temps bien sur)

"the only thing that the young woman's neighbours knew about her, it was that she was from Elmston and that she was trying to trace someone.

(un peu trop de "was, lol, non?)
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Post by serenita »

La-cosca wrote:"the only thing that the young woman's neighbours knew about her, it was that she was from Elmston and that she was trying to trace someone.
Proposition:
"The only thing the young woman's neighbours knew about her was (the fact) that she came from Elmston and was trying to trace someone"
"Al principio era el Verbo..."
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Post by Maïwenn »

Oui, j'aurais proposé exactement comme Serenita ! :)


La-cosca, on est tjs prêt pour t'aider !
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La-cosca
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Post by La-cosca »

ok merci beaucoup à vous deux !!

:D

bonne fin de journée à tous, et à la prochaine !
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