des phrases d'anglais à corriger

[Lodylarose]

Bonjour je prépare un oral et jaimerais juste que vous me corrigiez ceci:

I would like to become a social worker in order to help the persons having problems.

My hobbies are the dance, the badminton and the cinema.

Normaly this summer I must to travel to tunisian then to go to Marseille and to Brittany.

On the other hand I think to work in July in a children's outdoor activity.

[lodylarose]

S'il vous plaît. Merci beaucoup.

[Vikr]

I would like to become a social worker in order to help people having problems.

My hobbies are dance, badminton and cinema.

Normaly this summer I should travel to Tunisia, then go to Marseille and Brittany.

On the other hand I hope working on July in a children's outdoor activity.??

d'autres plus doués que moi corrigeront sans doute cette correction

[Maïwenn]

Normaly this summer I should travel to Tunisia then to go to Marseille and Brittany.

Très bon choix, surtout la fin du parcours

On the other hand I hope working on July in a children's outdoor activity.??

On the other hand I hope to work at an outdoor centre in July.

Pourquoi est ce que tu avais mis on July, Vikr, je pense que lodylarose avait raison avec in July...[/url]

[damas]

Oui , je pense que l'on utilise "in" pour les mois.

[Vikr]

Ah?
Ok
j'ai toujours utilisé, on , je crois

[ANTHOS]

Salut

Pour les deux phrases en question, je propose

In the summer, I expect to go on holiday to Tunisia, then to Marseille and Brittany.

je suis 90% sur que c'est le sens voulu.

But I am also thinking about working in an outdoor activity centre for children in July .


'on the other hand' est normalement précedé par 'on the one hand'.

Vikr

On emploie 'on' pour les jours dans
On the first of July
On Tuesday

Andréas

[Vikram]

Vikr

On emploie 'on' pour les jours dans
On the first of July
On Tuesday

Andréas

Merci

[lodylarose]

Merci bcp à tout le monde!!