Bonsoir,
Pouvez-vous m'indiquer si j'ai fait des fautes dans le résumé ci-dessous:
When I was 3 years old, I went to nursery school in my village. So I went to primary school when I was 6 years old. Unfortunately I was a repeater for my first class because I was immature. For secondary education, I went to a private college which is called "Victor Hugoà. It reminds me of the English teacher's name Carivan who was very sympatic. At the beginning I found Mathematics, Sports very easy. Now I prefer studying the subjets that I like as foreign languages, history. But I dislike Biology. When I consider my future life, I think to be responsible even if I make mistakes. Although I believe that my life would be interested.
Merci ... si vous pourriez m'aider ... MarTINE Seen you soon
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Je suis pas un pro en anglais, mais voici quelques corrections:
When I was 3 years old, I went to the nursery school in my village. Then I went to primary school when I was 6 years old. Unfortunately I was a repeater for (je suis pas tres sur du sens, tu veux dire que tu as redouble je suppose, donc je dirais: 'I had to repeat my' ou plus simple 'I repeated my..') my first class because I was immature. For secondary education, I went to a private college which is(inutile) called "Victor Hugoà. It reminds me of the English teacher's name Carivan who was very sympatic(Attention faux ami! il faut dire nice). At the beginning I found Mathematics, Sports very easy. Now I prefer studying the subjets that I like as(comme dans le sens de par exemple c'est like)('as' peut se traduire par 'en tant que') foreign languages, history (Du coup pour eviter d'avoir deux 'like' a la suite, je dirais: "I prefer studying subjects like foreign languages..". Regle d'or de l'anaglais: toujours aller vers la phrase la plus simple!). But I dislike Biology. When I consider my future life, I think to be responsible even if I make mistakes. Although I believe that my life would be interested. ('interested':c'est un participe passe! interessante(participe present)=interesting)
desole pour les accents, j'ai un clavier qwerty!
When I was 3 years old, I went to the nursery school in my village. Then I went to primary school when I was 6 years old. Unfortunately I was a repeater for (je suis pas tres sur du sens, tu veux dire que tu as redouble je suppose, donc je dirais: 'I had to repeat my' ou plus simple 'I repeated my..') my first class because I was immature. For secondary education, I went to a private college which is(inutile) called "Victor Hugoà. It reminds me of the English teacher's name Carivan who was very sympatic(Attention faux ami! il faut dire nice). At the beginning I found Mathematics, Sports very easy. Now I prefer studying the subjets that I like as(comme dans le sens de par exemple c'est like)('as' peut se traduire par 'en tant que') foreign languages, history (Du coup pour eviter d'avoir deux 'like' a la suite, je dirais: "I prefer studying subjects like foreign languages..". Regle d'or de l'anaglais: toujours aller vers la phrase la plus simple!). But I dislike Biology. When I consider my future life, I think to be responsible even if I make mistakes. Although I believe that my life would be interested. ('interested':c'est un participe passe! interessante(participe present)=interesting)
desole pour les accents, j'ai un clavier qwerty!
«C'est une triste chose de songer que la nature parle et que le genre humain ne l'écoute pas.» Victor Hugo
Voici le texte corrigé (quelque corrections en plus de celles de Dada)
When I was 3 years old, I started going to the nursery school in my village. Then I started primary school when I was 6 years old. Unfortunately I had to repeat my first year because I was behind. For my secondary education, I went to ‘Victor Hugo’ private college. This reminds me of Carivan, the name of my English teacher, who was very nice . In the beginning, I found Mathematics and Sports very easy. Now I prefer studying the subjects I like, such as foreign languages and history. But I don’t like Biology. When I think about the future, I think that I will be responsible even when I make mistakes. Although I believe that my life will be interesting
Commentaires:
‘had to repeat my first year because I was behind’. ‘immautre’ is not very appropriate in this context.
It is not clear what reminded you of your teacher’s name
Is this OK: "When I think about the future, I think that I will be responsible even when I make mistakes" Everyone makes mistakes so ‘when’ not ‘if’
‘Although’ ni the last sentence does not fit into the context.
When I was 3 years old, I started going to the nursery school in my village. Then I started primary school when I was 6 years old. Unfortunately I had to repeat my first year because I was behind. For my secondary education, I went to ‘Victor Hugo’ private college. This reminds me of Carivan, the name of my English teacher, who was very nice . In the beginning, I found Mathematics and Sports very easy. Now I prefer studying the subjects I like, such as foreign languages and history. But I don’t like Biology. When I think about the future, I think that I will be responsible even when I make mistakes. Although I believe that my life will be interesting
Commentaires:
‘had to repeat my first year because I was behind’. ‘immautre’ is not very appropriate in this context.
It is not clear what reminded you of your teacher’s name
Is this OK: "When I think about the future, I think that I will be responsible even when I make mistakes" Everyone makes mistakes so ‘when’ not ‘if’
‘Although’ ni the last sentence does not fit into the context.