J'ai ecris un mail a une correspondante americaine et j'aimerai bien avoir l'avis d'une personne parlant anglais. Toute la lettre a bien sur ete ecrite prealablement en anglais, mais etant en train de me familiariser avec cette langue, il ne serait pas impossible que des fautes se soient farouchement glissees la dedans...
Voici mon mail:
En vous remerciant tous,Hello Tina,
I'm very glad to read you. I think you received my letter (I hope there wasn't too much mistake...), so you know quite some things about me.
I see you like music, I do too. What sort of music do you play? I've a friend who plays the piano, and she is really excellent.
I have got some questions about your family... You do not have got any sister or brother? I've two sisters, but both are married and do not live at home anymore.
I hope you package will arrive in time, because mail takes usually one or two weeks from USA, but it must enough if you send it this week. What's the weather like? Is it cold or hot during spring time? The weather seems to be truly different in America...
Your family looks very pleasant, and I think this experience will be tremendous for us.
It's my first time in America, so I don't know if you have a special family way (religion, etc.). I'm open-minded and I will be very pleased to take part in your traditions.
I hope to hear from you soon, and I'm keen to see you and your family in real life...
Bye...
Amicalement