Correction of a letter in English

[Elro]

I'm french, and I had to write a letter, explaining why I am interested in a post, but I think -I'm sure !- that it would need some correction.
Thanks.



"I allow myself to solicit you for obtaining a post as a french assistant in any establishment that would be your choice, I must admit with a preference for Northen Ireland.
Of course, it woul be out of the question for me, to refuse a post in Scotland or in England.

I can now tackle the goal of my demand. I cannot imagine how it would be possible to teach french teenagers, if I do not know more about habits, customs, humour, the way of life, and more simply, the country about which I would try to make love the language. That is why I think that a assistant job would be an excellent and necessary experience before becoming a teacher in France.

You are aware, thanks to my inscription file, that I have studied psychology for one year before definitely chosing english studies. I think that it can be an advantage as part of this program -meeting and teaching young foreigners.
It shall be noticed that I am the eldest in a sibling composed by three children, and there, a minimum of psychology is more than necessary.
I have been giving private classes -english and french- to teenagers for some years, and I think that it is a good experience before giving classes to more numerous students.
I love getting involved in anything that enjoys me, getting to the bottom of things, and I am very dynamic, and I think that are advantges to make lively and interesting classes to pupils and students.

I really hope that my motivations will favourably catch your attention.

Yours Faithfully,
"

[BlackKimono]

Here are some corrections.

"I allow myself to solicit you for obtaining a post as a French assistant in any establishment that would be your choice, I must admit with a preference for Northern Ireland.
Of course, it would be out of question for me, to refuse a post in Scotland or in England.

I can now tackle the goal of my demand. I cannot imagine how it would be possible to teach French teenagers, if I do not know more about the habits, the customs, the humour, the way of life, and more simply, the country the language of which I would try to make (them?) love. That is why I think that the job of an assistant would be an excellent and necessary experience before becoming a teacher in France.

You are aware, thanks to my inscription file, that I have studied psychology for one year before definitely choosing English studies. I think that it can be an advantage as part of this program -meeting and teaching young foreigners.
It shall be noticed that I am the eldest in a sibling composed by three children, and there, a minimum of psychology is more than necessary.
I have been giving private classes -English and French- to teenagers for some years, and I think that it is a good experience before giving classes to many more students.
I love getting involved in anything that I enjoy, getting to the bottom of things, and I am very dynamic, and I think that those are advantages to make lively and interesting classes to pupils and students.

I really hope that my motivations will favourably catch your attention.

Yours Faithfully,