english proofreading - urgent please!!!!!

[laura]

hi everybody,

would you please check out possible errors in the text below?

It is a job advertisement I have to publish on a local newspaper.

Thank a lot!



We look for:
10 PORTERS FOR FURNITURE REMOVAL ACTIVITY.
ONLY HIGHLY MOTIVATED CANDIDATES WILL BE CONSIDERED. WORKPLACE:
ROME – CITY CENTER

[ANTHOS]

We are looking for
10 PEOPLE FOR FURNITURE REMOVALS
ONLY HIGHLY MOTIVATED CANDIDATES WILL BE CONSIDERED.
AREA: ROME – CITY CENTRE


je suppose tu parles de ceux qui démenagent les meubles

workplace sous-entend un lieu, pas très adapté ici

[ANTHOS]

en fait 'HIGHLY MOTIVATED CANDIDATES' fait un peu chi-chi dans le contexte

je mettrais plutôt

ENTHUSIASM A MUST

ENTHUSIASM ESSENTIAL

[laura]

thanks anthos!!!

your answers are always so clear and exhaustive!!
I am very grateful to you for your help!