Je refait quelques modifs du coup sur ma correction
, 2-3 petites fautes...- Pourquoi met tu ton nom au départ ? il est censé l'être dejà en entête de ta lettre...moi je le mettrai pas...
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I am studying languages at Charles de Gaulle-Lille university in France. I have been studying Polish for two years. I have an immoderate passion for Poland and had the opportunity to go there several times and to meet Polish people.
These experiences made me change my professional goals. I would like to do a Master's Degree in European studies in order to work in the European institutions or indirectly with the European Union. In this aim (peut être pourrais tu mettre "I believe that Polish..."), Polish will have an important role as one of the rare and useful official languages of the European Union. Anyway, Polish would be a great asset regarding my professional goals.
I would like to take part in the Polish summer language course because I like the country and its culture. This trip to Poland will be the opportunity to improve my knowledge of the language and to take part into the everyday life in Poland and futhermore to visit Warsaw.
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=> je changerai ta dernière phrase...ça fait trop touriste de vouloir visiter Warsaw...et tu y vas quand même pour bosser avant tout...peut être "to take part into the everyday life in Warsaw" tout simplement. Ca eviterais de répeter une xième fois Poland et ça montrerais quand même quand que tu aimes la ville...
Voilou...attends d'autres avis maintenant de ceux qui renviendront de week end demain
EDIT: je pense aussi qu'il manque quelques petits mots de liaison pour rendre la lettre plus naturelle....