correction anglais

[ace]

Bonjour

pouvez vous me corriger ce e mail?

merci beaucoup

Hello


This is Sandy from France.
I don't know what can I do for the presentation of my country, maybe I can introduce food.
Concerning the flight, I will take the same with Sophie , also student in the same school. We will arrive the Xth july at 14 : 20, the number of flight is X and the departure of kaohshiung is the X july at 15 : 45, this is the X flight. We will arrive directly to the airport kaohsiung.

Thanks very much for your help,
Best regards,

[anthos pc]

This is Sandy from France.

I don't know how to present my country; maybe I can begin with food.
Concerning the flight, I will take the same one as Sophie , who is also a student in the same school. We will arrive on the Xth july at 14:20h, the flight number is X and the departure from kaohshiung is X july at 15:45h, flight number. We will arrive directly at kaohsiung airport .

Thanks very much for your help,

Best regards,

[ace]

Bonjour !

merci pour la correction, j'ai un autre texte que jai déjà envoyé mais je n'ai pas eu de réponse est ce que vous pouvez me dire si c'est juste? est ce compréhensible? j'ai déjà fait une petite erreur avec payed (paid) !
merci

I am a student Xx learning chinese at University of provence (France). I have received an email of XXX who has said I can participate in the 2009 Seminar . So, I send you this e mail with remittance receipt to tell you I have payed the seminar this last 27 may. I hope you will receive it.