hebrew translation.. is this correct?

[Guest]

מענק של אלוהים אותי השלווה לקבל את הדברים אני לא יכול להשתנות
האומץ להפוך את הדברים אני יכול
והחכמה לדעת שההבדל]

i want this (previous) text to read:

God grant me the serenity to accpet the things i cannot change
the courage to change the things i can
and the wisdom to know the difference

is this correct and does it read as it would be read by a hebrew speaking person? if not, can someone provide corrections? my email is dvartst@hotmail.com if it can be sent.. i can receive it there. cheers!!

[kokoyaya]

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