one sentence- proofreading please

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laura
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one sentence- proofreading please

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Bonjour à tous,

Would you please give a look at the sentence below?

Very goog knowledge of project management products realizing projects by using Gant diagrams like Microsoft Project.

Thanks in advance!!!! :hello:
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Re: one sentence- proofreading please

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laura wrote:Bonjour à tous,

Would you please give a look at the sentence below?

Very goog knowledge of project management products realizing projects by using Gant diagrams like Microsoft Project.

Thanks in advance!!!! :hello:
"By using Gant diagrams, like Microsoft Project, [you can] obtain [a] very good knowledge of project management products."

or

"...realizing [a] very good knowledge of project management products by using Gant diagrams, like Microsoft Project."

My second example is only a fragment (the second half of a sentence), you would need to beef it up a bit.
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