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Need urgently a correction of an English text!

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Need URGENTLY correction of this text. Is to tomorrow to the school. I pass all the day translating but i dont know if is correct.

It is translate from the spanish to the english
Mexico limits the north with the United States, the east with the gulf of Mexico and the Caribbean Sea, to the Southeastern with Belize and Guatemala, and to the west and the south with the Pacific Ocean. The total surface of the country and islands is 1.964.382 of km².

ART
So many weavers, potters and goldsmiths, the Mexican craftsmen produce a great variety of beautiful and representative articles, valued internationally. Stand out for the manufacture of articles of palm, henequen, ceramics, wood, gold, silver, glass, textiles and skin (leather).

EDUCATION
The primary and secondary education is free and obligatory for all the children up to 14 years.

POPULATION
It is composed by three principal groups: half-caste, aborigines and population of European origin.

RELIGION
The Catholicism is the religion that they practice, more than 93 % of the Mexicans.

LANGUAGE
The official and prevailing language is the Spanish, spoken by the great majority of the population; besides, there are spoken approximately 54 languages, dialects and indigenous languages, of which the principal ones are the náhuatl.


ECONOMY
Mexico reflects the change of an economy of primary production, based on farming and mining activities, towards a semi-industrialized.

Agriculture
Near 25 % of the Mexican manpower are dedicated to the agriculture,
The principal agricultural products of Mexico were: maize(corn); wheat; barley; rice; vegetables; you eat; coffee; cotton; cane of sugar; fruit; and vegetables. The ranching, this one shaped by cattle of bull, of pig, of caprino, of sheep, of horses, of mule.

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correction:
Mexico limits the north with the United States, the east with the gulf of Mexico and the Caribbean Sea, to the Southeastern with Belize and Guatemala, and to the west and the south with the Pacific Ocean. The total surface of the country and islands is 1.964.382 of km².

ART
So many weavers, potters and goldsmiths, the Mexican craftsmen produce a great variety of beautiful and representative articles, valued internationally. Stand out for the manufacture of articles of palm, henequen, ceramics, wood, gold, silver, glass, textiles and skin (leather).

EDUCATION
The primary and secondary education is free and obligatory for all children up to 14 years.

POPULATION
It is composed by three principal groups: half-caste, aborigines and population of European origin.

RELIGION
The Catholicism is the religion that they practice, more than 93 % of the Mexicans.

LANGUAGE
The official and prevailing language is the Spanish, spoken by the great majority of the population; besides, there are spoken approximately 54 languages, dialects and indigenous languages, of which the principal ones are the náhuatl.


ECONOMY
Mexico reflects the change of an economy of primary production, based on farming and mining activities, towards a semi-industrialized.

Agriculture
Near 25 % of the Mexican manpower are dedicated to the agriculture,
The principal agricultural products of Mexico were: maize(corn); wheat; barley; rice; vegetables; you eat; coffee; cotton; cane of sugar; fruit; and vegetables. The ranching, this one shaped by cattle of bull, of pig, of goat, of sheep, of horses, and mule.
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Re: Need urgently a correction of an English text!

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Mexico is borded in the North with the United States, in the East with the gulf of Mexico and the Caribbean Sea, in the South East with Belize and Guatemala, and in the West and the South with the Pacific Ocean. The total surface of the country with its islands is 1.964.382 km².

ART
With so many weavers, potters and goldsmiths, the Mexican craftsmen produce a great variety of beautiful and representative articles, internationally valued. They stand out for the manufacture of articles of palm, henequen, ceramics, wood, gold, silver, glass, textiles and skin (leather).

EDUCATION
The primary and secondary education is free and obligatory for all the children up to 14 years.

POPULATION
It is composed by three principal groups: half-caste, aborigines and population of European origin.

RELIGION
The Catholicism is the religion that practice more than 93 % of the Mexicans.

LANGUAGE
The official and prevailing language is the Spanish, spoken by the great majority of the population; besides, there are spoken approximately 54 languages, dialects and indigenous languages, and the main of these is the náhuatl.

ECONOMY
Mexico reflects the change of an economy of primary production, based on farming and mining activities, towards a semi-industrialized one.

AGRICULTURE
Near 25 % of the Mexican manpower are dedicated to the agriculture,
The principal agricultural products of Mexico are: maize(corn); wheat; barley; rice; coffee; cotton; cane of sugar; fruit and vegetables. There is also ranching, shaped by cattle of bulls, of pigs, of goats, of sheeps, of horses, of mules.

I think this could be correct.
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