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Please, correct a work for studies

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Hello, I'm french, and I do a work with friends, in English.
Could you see this work, and correct faults of language please?

As the marketing responsible and sells director of B.C.A. (Bateau côte d’azur) company, I will explain to you what the type of our activity is. It deals with conception and production of two different hulls. On the one hand there are hulls of type “B”, whose are specifics in order to go for a sail on the sea, on lakes or on estuaries. They are composed by a cabin for two persons, two seats and a platform. There is a possibility to fit out the kitchen. Moreover, this type of hull can easily be transportable.
On the other hand, the suggest an other hull type called “C” which is for sails on the sea, on a lake and for the big-game fishing. Hulls are bigger and more luxurious than the first. They are composed by one cabin for two persons and another one for two persons. In addition there is a cockpit and a solarium.

Both of the two types can be fit out by outboard motors or by a sail mast. The second one can be equipped by two powerful motors. Both of them have a plastic facilities and a wood finish. The two types can have a sport or yachting use. Security and pleasure are the priorities of our company. Nevertheless we know you probably have financial pressure, that’s why of you buy in bulk, there is a possibility to negotiate prices. Moreover, you will have advantages if you become faithful to our products. Finally, we can adapt our products to your requests.
If you have issues, you can call us back; we are entirely your disposal.


Thank you :)
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Please?
You don't understand my request?...or there are problems?
It's very important and for Tuesday... :cry:
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